Hello and welcome to exampundit . We rolled out the SBI PO Descriptive Contest a few days back and we got a lot of responses. We will be publishing the BEST of the Lot. But that does not mean, your one was Bad. The topic “Write a letter to the Branch Manager enquiring about the services available for your start-up” is aced by Domino.
From
Domino
A-21, DC Apartment
Sector 10
Dwarka
New Delhi – 110075
Date: 14th
July, 2016
July, 2016
To
The Branch Manager
HDFC Bank
Dwarka Branch
Dwarka
New Delhi – 110075
Respected Sir,
Sub: Information about the services available for
startups.
startups.
I am one of the customers of your
esteemed bank and I have recently come across an article on a national daily
regarding your bank offering services to the emerging startup companies. I have
an online business which I would like to expand and the start up platform
serves the purpose best.
esteemed bank and I have recently come across an article on a national daily
regarding your bank offering services to the emerging startup companies. I have
an online business which I would like to expand and the start up platform
serves the purpose best.
Your bank is one of the most
trusted entities in the country which is the sole reason of me asking for your
kind assistance. My business encompasses
around ethnic clothing for women and I have attached the revenue model as well
as the financial turnover with this letter. I hope this will help you to
provide me a better insight into the services which I can avail through your
bank.
trusted entities in the country which is the sole reason of me asking for your
kind assistance. My business encompasses
around ethnic clothing for women and I have attached the revenue model as well
as the financial turnover with this letter. I hope this will help you to
provide me a better insight into the services which I can avail through your
bank.
I will be obliged if you can
revert to my letter at earnest with the particulars I am seeking.
revert to my letter at earnest with the particulars I am seeking.
Yours faithfully,
Domino
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Now note very carefully,
Here we asked you to write a letter to the manager asking about the services for your start up. However, most of the entries stated a few common things, 1) I am from poor family/low caste or 2) I want to start my business or 3) I am jobless so want to start a business. These are not something you should be writing.
New topics will be given today!!
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Team ExamPundit
